Uncovered

Verse I: Wandering souls,
watching my every move,
hearing my every breath,
there covered in lies,
wandering bodies,
bleeding with selfishness,
crying tears of hatred

Chorus: they can hear me,
they can see me,
they won't help me
I'm on my own,
They are watching,
no ones helping,
I'm on my own,
I'm on my own....

Verse II: wandering souls,
there waking up waking up,
there uncovering there lies,
wandering bodies,
maybe theyll help me,

Chorus II: they can hear me,
they can see me,
they will help me,
I'm not alone,
They are watching,
they are helping,
I'm not alone,
i'm not alone...

Outro: Instrumental

I like this song Bro I think it is something we all feel. I think we all have people who are watching us and we feel as if they won't help us or can't help us but in reality they can we just didnt ask for help. I like the change from the I'm alone to the realization that you are not.

thats what i was going for thanks bro!

Josh,I'm glad that when you do post,it's worthwhile.A lot of folks,no not you John,post a lot of........well,not great stuff.This song of yours has influenced me to post a song with similar structure;2 verses followed by choruses.Also it ends in a chorus.I was kind of hesitant to post it because I was "worried"that it might not be complete.Thanks to you,and the above song,I now feel confident it's good enough to post.Thank you my young friend!

thank you so much doug your a inspiration to me and im glad i could help you out, thanks again!

Originally Posted by JoshD

thank you so much doug your a inspiration to me and im glad i could help you out, thanks again!

Dude,you're dah Man!