Pillamatic

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  1. JSTEF said:

    Default Pillamatic

    Eyes so red from the bottle of the meds,
    Heart-rate descends, nope not dead.
    Addict in recovery, new discovery,
    Joe's favorite place is at CVS Pharmacy.
    Went up to the Pharmacist looking like the Exorcist,
    Demanding dem pills that will make me the sloppiest.
    When it comes to taking pharmaceuticals,
    I'm the Cookie Monster with dilated pupils.
    Just like his fur, my favorite color blue,
    30's preferred, Oxy hit me like Kung Fu. Man all I wanted was to just take two,
    Script of 30 footballs, the color powdered blue.
    Started with a couple, turned into double,
    Multiply that double by at least fifteen,
    Awoke in disarray re-ali-zing, finished the whole script in one sitting.
    Stumble around, looking like the cast of Walking Dead,
    Mumble out loud, might surpass Courtney Love, balling pill head.
    First thing I do when I wake is grab that bottle,
    and I'm not talking about some cheap as gin, But a handful of Morphine and a bunch of K-PINS.
    Listen, I just wrote a verse not wavering from pills,
    This messed up world dam well knows that it kills,
    Every corner a Drug Store is collecting all your bills,
    While your Primary Doctor is writing you a script with 6 refills.
    Controlling this World soon is the Drug Companies,
    Coming up with another pill while a 14 year old kid OD's.
    Last edited by JSTEF; 06-05-2013 at 03:22 AM. Reason: Missed a line
     
  2. pq92k said:

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    This is well-written especially lines 5 and 10. You created a good flow of words that paint a vivid picture in the mind. The only line I dislike is the last one.
     
  3. orsen said:

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    Agree with above, very well-written and produces a easy picture to see.