Long Time

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    Johnb31 said:

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    I've been thinking bout the world long time ago
    Back before, there was any girls
    And there was nothing that I couldn't do
    There was nothing that wasn't true
    "Chorus"
    Well That was a long long time ago
    And now I'm here wishing to let go
    And let my life, slip away nice and slow
    Back to the days of a long long time ago


    I've been thinking of everything I couldn't be
    But now I wonder was it just all a dream
    This guy in the picture doesn't seem to be me
    And I just can't believe what was happening
    "Chorus"
    Well That was a long long time ago
    And now I'm here wishing to let go
    And let my life, slip away nice and slow
    Back to the days of a long long time ago
    "Bridge"
    Every moment is passing by again
    And I can feel the clock tick within
    Constantly running
    Never turning back again
    I can feel it, racing within
    I can feel the days coming to an end
    And I know that the past is the past
    And that's why I'll make every minute last
    "Chorus"
    Well That was a long long time ago
    And now I'm here never letin go
    Today's the day that I venture nice and slow
    Into the darkness of a future long time ago
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
  2. pq92k said:

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    Perhaps consider combining the two verses together as it allows the thought to be more complete and not rushed; hence the title "Long Time". I really like the bridge and the chorus is well-written. I really like the following lines: "Today's the day that I venture nice and slow /Into the darkness of a future long time ago"