a philip update (haha)/the doubtful few

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  1. Philip Wrobel said:

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    Sorry for not posting or reviewing in a long while (if an one actually cares is doubtful) but I've been focusing on my guitar skills (like doug told me to) and have been having a lot of family issues so here is a big post (3 XD) of songs (some obviously unfinished) to those (doubtful few) who care

    Sample

    There she goes
    Her Dagger in her hand
    The same story
    But a different man
    His shot glass full while hers is empty
    Shes got none while hes got plenty
    This is the story of sam
    Everyday she walked up the street
    Pick up every guy she'd meet
    No one would fit the mold
    She just wanted someone to hold
    By noon shed stop at the bar
    Looking for her shinging star
    This is the story of sam
    (1234)
    The nights growing longer
    The days growing colder
    Shed sit by the fire
    But nobodies there
    She sits in her rocker
    Cause toms not a talker
    They just sit there
    And they watch the tube
    Suicidal
    Its the revival , the revival of sam!!

    Airplane

    Toy models are all I see
    Way up here
    Where its only me
    Hold me here dont let me down
    Cause if I fall I'll hit the ground
    Way above this world sound
    Just Hold me here
    hold me now
    Cars and trucks can have their roads
    Because all I need is those who know
    The secrets kept above the world

    And I know
    Im falling
    And I know
    I wont make it long
    But I hope
    Youll catch me
    Oh I hope youll catch me

    Falling faster I look out
    I see a world that screams and shouts
    Pointless noise that rings upon my ears
    Little world just dry eyes
    The sky will soon come crashing down
    But the world wont notice
    Their lost in sound

    And I know
    Im falling
    And I know
    I wont make it long
    But I hope
    Youll catch me
    Oh I hope youll catch me

    The ground surronds me
    Im burried deep
    You stamp upon me with your feet
    The sky has fallen But you are left
    As i rot as I decay
    Soon a tree will find its way
    Through my heart through my soul
    It grows from me
    Lifes gone full circle

    And I know
    Im falling
    And I know
    I wont make it long
    But I hope
    Youll catch me
    Oh I hope youll catch me
    Oh I hope
    Youll ...catch ...me

    The man in the moon

    I sleep through the day
    I live for the night
    I search for whats wrong
    But cant find, whats right
    X2

    But when the man in the moon disappears
    And we're all here drying our tears
    And if love is if love is the light
    Then I guess we'll be lonely tonight

    Some people have told me
    That I am a fool
    For dreaming of
    For dreaming of
    For dreaming of the man the moon

    But when the man in the moon disappears
    And we're all here drying our tears
    And if love is if love is the light
    Then I guess we'll be lonely tonight

    But when the man in the moon disappears
    And we're all here drying our tears
    And if love is if love is the light
    Then I guess we'll be lonely tonight

    But when the man in the moon disappears
    And im here drying my tears
    And if love is if you are my light
    Then I guess I'll be lonely tonight

    I sleep through the day
    I live for the night
    I sleep through the day
    I live for the night
    I search for what is wrong!
    But cant , but cant
    But cant find,
    what is right!

    Wings (poem)


    I wish, that I had wings

    So that I, could take your hand

    And we could fly up to a starry land

    I wish I had wings

    Me and you, we could escape this noise

    Just

    You

    Me

    And my old set of wings
     
  2. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    I've stopped posting replies due to nobody giving me any (except Amaryn)on my last song.But since you both mentioned me and are playing your guitar,like I advised,I'll give you my thoughts on the above.
    @Sample:I thought these were great verses,now put in a chorus(refrain)and you're in Hit City!
    @Airplane:I really like this,but why not post it on it's own Thread?It certainly deserves it.
    @the man in the moon:another great little tune,that shows me that you're back with some good song lyrics!