The Thespian Oars

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    The Thespian Oars




    I. A pale folklore

    O'er the aghast and sickened
    Pharmacies and bed nights prolongens
    As fire therein, seared whispers of the longests
    Waywards traversed
    A benthic of unborn thoughts whence
    Riddles, domain sneering’s from its depths
    Remnants kept, bred on dermersal
    Yet, o'er abashed years created silence
    None would hear oft again
    But sought the night prowl
    He that dared, to thread without the know
    And sought to its wealth he glanced upon its panes
    Dreary from the roads, but wary at the drop
    A post side mansion abandoned, grand of sight
    Perpetual, in its existence none
    Would lay waste oft
    If wouldst seem its wreath would bind thee
    If so, in its wisher halls to be moor



    II. The banished one unheard

    Demeaned of nothing naked and bereft

    O'er the aghast and sickened, yet
    The riversider's speak of them
    Still wandering in its den
    "Canst get them outh! I say!
    Its harrows swells, but nothing if madness struck upon!"
    Steer ahead I must not do, lest they call upon thee
    Time to set foot on this grave
    Time to rewind in its past if I shall dare
    Pray, for wealth?
    Alas! Steered the doors were, barricaded walls
    Rears protection and a sign "Enter at great risk!"
    Nor, did I ever think of that
    Nor, would I have entered thought of this
    If not the course I must persist
    Pray, for me?
    A strong scent bewilders..
    And a trapdoor of perhaps, sits tightly neath old rubble's
    Cats fled past me in the terror of its wake!
    Did they ever think of food and was left to be found?
    No...guess they were saved...
    The stories matched...
    Horror, as swept upon head
    Endless corridors absent ends..
    Sounds, as musketeers marching echoes
    Like clangs and cogs ticking in an eerie symphony!
    I am amidst hell, nor would I ever wish what’s like it!
    Yet here I am naught; I'd heard could it ever be matched?
    This ours, a life beyond this silenced dorm?
    A scream deafens me
    This calm serenity, pushing me
    Further, from reality and itself!
    Save me for what the mind, absent light
    The fear and the intertwined trips and wears me off
    An ignition roars...
    Rippled storms! A stark damnation covets of a breath in
    Still they roam, each the inmates the keepers oars
    But an dead silhouette still, upon brimstone's
    Now guardians of these walls, whispers
    Madness neath and baying of the cells
    Roses wild the thorns of piece and mind!
    But as struck upon a gruesome, yet
    As of an deserved faith to
    Those afflicted, defied of morality and itself....
    What's been presented I've taken a few sets of valuable goods already?
    Yet there's this feel, not of this dread before
    A ricochet of what could it be...but a mourn?
    A gloom leers midst the floor
    Carpet layeth fold as thousands
    Gathers there's dust balls, thought whispers of untold release!
    As of any story which wonders truly demands this?
    A shade, appears before me in the low
    Swirls the remains of air, as it rises from the mists!


    "Didst have a key? Dost bear nothing but doors?
    Or perhaps a moors from whence he came? Why art thou here?"
    "Frightened me, your presence!
    Spiraled from the undertow!
    Here, I've searched as nothing found!
    Naught for the same reason why
    Am I here? As you and then?
    Crossing these borders from whence to once, to
    Why I keep repeating this wonder? For wealth for me?"

    "Hmm, seems this at loss of something sought
    These echoes passage perceived, what any wish foreseen
    Eyes dost see upon a theatre had lived, yes?"

    "Something of that, something of past
    Time and another world it feels, like I miss
    Sometimes and sometimes not, you are correct"

    "Would've not begone if what sought for, therefore just and granted?"
    "Granted, depends on what’s dependable and yours begone?
    I recall, having contact with many of your likes
    Such as compared to yourself!
    But not of this, nor would I have imagined this
    ...what is it you want of me...specter?"

    "Revelations, answers, or the quarter past ticking away
    Corroding, upon an asylum rotting of its gruesome ways!
    Why was there an uproar, the fire, the inmates which set?
    A keeper's perversity emerged, as foul sanctity for the purest satisfaction felt?
    Wouldst doth seen? Theirs ripping each of others because of it?
    Would naught, if I where ripped as seen aparts!
    But amidst those storms, the pits would swell
    Unfettered beasts ever barking towards hell...
    The end, ere drafts the core of breath'e
    As shadows pulse thick spews, looming o'er darker years
    Still, corners of there's who's existence upon a child
    A fear inside of them grew, who's pity
    O'er aghast they cast, gale'd and sickened
    Every early morn, mists upon their gaze met...
    Locked inside their grace of
    Ever! Was I cautious from
    But raised upon their questions
    Of replays am I, a wardens pursuit in what I need ask of
    Why a single human, from no ends of an thespian greateth
    Spared for any dareth these steps before, to not expect a disappearance
    As of any for disrupting our peace of mourn?"
    "Great Haunt!
    I only came here as an act upon this victim
    You see, I am you, yet living
    Banished
    My king, he hath no longer my worthy deemed of his theatres a presence...
    As I've come to these ends now, what neither would've done before!
    You see! I am you, for as much as you reflect!"

    "Thou didst fumble and hell
    Left the thespian to gain
    If so in its wisher halls to be sought
    Doth yearns to be oft
    Left it here, upon this grave
    See thou spared if..."
    "Come then fear
    Thy face
    Quarters, past or present!
    And grant me thus earth and sky!
    For where, would I end ere?
    If so, was I naught this act of anymore?
    But for honesty I ruled to live, see
    Why didst I dwell?
    Whence opened before me!
    So what's
    Your resolution shall be defined?
    A part of me?"

    "A part of this, a part of I will consume
    Or, let go and forget
    These walls are now and then
    And thus, the thespian oars across the Styx if he shall he and
    Evermore..."


    III. Am I, where?

    Cold, touch, inhumane
    Vague memories remain
    Feel myself and far away
    The shaking stills, but a slice of bread
    I found in my satchel for the roads
    A parchment... left of hidden sight!
    And a little poetry.. within;

    O'er the aghast and sickened
    The act or his gain
    For wealth, for him?
    No
    Not for he
    But for them
    Awakened where he yonder
    A thespian in our halls

    Where dost thou hide now
    In life?

    Last edited by Eccer; 09-27-2013 at 09:53 AM.
     
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    So I'm kinda throwing this one out, I just wanted to see if its a good story or not. Any critics are welcome...
     
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    This needs a few rereadings before I dare to open my mouth, Eccer. You really made this a challenge!
     
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    I tried some reminiscence of alchemical texts though, it's not even near that calibre. Or correct if in that matter but...I tried doing this without thinking, and it almost felt like painting. But what's so great about writing is you can edit if, it didn't quite make sense...Lol So please, take your time ^^ No rush.


    Edit: Added a picture which fit nicely
    Last edited by Eccer; 09-05-2013 at 04:27 AM.