dying

i cant remember if i ever posted this one. forgive me if i have. thanks you guys have been good and i have been writing. its just been a while since i have posted. thanks for reading

I can feel it flash before my eyes
no need to hide it
ive tried to fight it
but i cant

all the times i try
you never seem to care
all you want to do
is wait for me to

Soft lyrics
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Hard
DIE
i cant
i woulnt
you try to
end my life
but you never
know i was all ready

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soft
gone
i never wanted it this way
i never really had a chose
you knew it all along
you had it planed
and waited for me to


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Hard
DIE
i cant
i woulnt
you try to
end my life
but you never
know i was all ready






ive tried but in the end you see

The angst, anger, and heartbreak are very apparent in the lyrics. There is one minor error. Did you mean "had to choose" or "had a choice"? Other than that, it looks really good. I am wondering, on the other hand, when you refer to hard music are you thinking thrash metal, a pounding hard rock march (like "Iron Man") or something along the lines of Styx or Kansas?

Thanks.. I am also a guitarist. Im more on the lines of stone sour mixed with five finger death punch alot of people say.