Who am I

Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jqv3T...ature=youtu.be

Chrorus:
Who am I?
I cross lines just to see the other side/
Who am I?/
Who am I?/
I feel blind, my eyes are butchered
I'm beaten with lies
Intricate webs, deadly design/
Who am I?/
Who am I?/
I feel blind, I feel blind/
Who am I?/
Who am I?/
I feel blind, deadly design/

Verse:
Greedy motives on top/
Stop-motion like an ocean full of twitching knives/
I dine for more than wine/
I die inside just to stay alive/
I shoulder burdens for others
while cowards take cover/
I am no lover for flesh
I am a soul that will suffer/
I eat reality for breakfast
and shame for supper/
My disease is depression
and my sleep is confession/
I stay hard cause the hard way
is my continuous lesson/
my willpower is keen
from constant suppression/
I am the one who lays truth
there's always an answer
never a question/
Degrading structures in my world
sections by sessions, the pain never lessens
now it's got my affection/

No regression/

Reminds me of Ace Hood kinda, well that's how I read it. I feel like your lines could use more syllable count and some better drops to keep the crowd going with that damn factor. This is some pretty good stuff though man nice!

ty bro!

Anytime man!