just won't die

Thread: just won't die

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  1. Tomatomic said:

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    sticks and stones may break my bones but names will never hurt me x3
    sticks and stones break my bones but names... DON'T HURT ME!!!

    i'm tough skinned, as i've always been
    never feared no word or blade
    i shrug off the blows
    identify my foes
    pick myself up and break my chains

    I persevere mechanically
    no surrender, not till death

    do what you can to try and hurt me
    take your best shot again
    there is no lie, and no mystery
    as to why, i wont die... I WON'T DIE!!

    i've suffered worse and i'll suffer again
    but always i just ignore the pain
    i stand up straight
    and i make you wait
    i'm coming for you, i'm all that remains

    i endure, stoically
    one defeat, i'll win the war

    do what you can to try and hurt me
    take your best shot again
    there is no lie and no mystery
    as to why, i won't die... I WON'T DIE!!

    that's way it's got to be
    no man alive will bury me
    it will take more than that soon you'll see
    why... I WON'T DIE!!!!!!!!!

    do what you can to try and hurt me
    you've missed and here i stand
    i won't tell a lie nor try to hide
    the truth, I JUST WON'T DIE!! x3
    Last edited by Tomatomic; 07-22-2013 at 05:44 PM.
     
  2. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    I can "hear" this being played,which what I judge a good song by.Your rhymes are there,so is the rhythm.My Atomic friend,you're becoming a songwriter extrodinare!<(this is supposedly not a word,but I hope you know what I mean)
     
  3. Tomatomic said:

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    As always Doug your words give me hope. Cheers my friend