Slope so steep

Still a working progress. But it's about love at first sight so enjoy

Hey you there
Looking so cute
With your long black hair
I want to get to know you

I want to sit and listen
To your never ending stories
You don't have to say your sorry
It's my pleasure

My first thought when i awake
My last breath before I sleep
I fell for you on a slope so steep
I want to take you home

Saw you coming towards me
I thought this was my chance
But you past without a glance
But I'm not done yet

I'm going to make you mine
I'd give you my last dime
And every second of my time
To hold you for a million years

My first thought when i awake
My last breath before I sleep
I fell for you on a slope so steep
I want to take you home

Id do anything for you
Share my every emotion
Swim across every ocean
Just to hold your hand

keep pushing me aside
But il never give in
Your heart I will win
Turn this me in to us

My first thought when i awake
My last breath before I sleep
I fell for you on a slope so steep
I want to take you home

"Slope So Steep" has to be the title!It jumps off the page and is a totally original line,in the way it's used.This has to be the title!!

Always use the first line for an untitled song. It's "Hey you there!"

Thanks guys I had to go with doug on this one slope so steep it

Originally Posted by trueperfectionisimperfect

Thanks guys I had to go with doug on this one slope so steep it

So where's my "Like"?!?