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Verse:
After the dust settles/
the
cards are are shuffled/
these
duffle-bag hustlers that try and commit murder wanna push it further on a chorus/
through killin' and feelin' flesh that they laid, gettin' ***** is what they say/
so quick to cut their innocence out, then throw it away/
day after day, no one to blame, no one to give them shame/
so
they can retaliate or hook onto the lonely train with a double-edged blade on the front/
cause they need to feel pain just to get noticed or get paid/

"Hey look at me, I'm insane"/
"I know how you feel, I have peeled off your shoes, after they've been through the sewer grates"/
"I'm real, I smoke weed, popping that extacy, I bleed, I'm also fat and cheap"/
"I stoop low to cheat when I've been beat by someone better than me"/
"I understand everything you've felt and seen physically, spiritually, mentally"/
"It's almost like we're family, we can relate"/
"Now come over and kiss my *** cause I'm great, cause I'm vain, cause I'm desperate"/
"I don't know why I don't have friends, I follow the sheep and try to fit in"/
"Why isn't it working? Why do I get stabbed in the back?"/
"I'm a girl, I tried twerking"/
"I'm a guy, I tried hurting"/
"I can't get respect, what do I do?"/

Well more or less, just be who who you are and improve/
Stream-line your groove, be smooth, not cool/
Relax because you choose your path, however it leads/
Just believe in yourself and you'll succeed, eventually/
Hone your mind into a keen machine, accept adive from the old and wise, follow your dreams/
You are who you are, and who you are is waht you want to be/
Break bread and you'll get mutual respect, confess and you'll impress/
Dress how you want, you will blind the press/
Like a fly bird made of onyx in the sky, sun reflecting off of your hater shades/
Wake up and love every day, be thankful you're not dead and in the grave/
You can do anything/
With will-defying rhinestone eyes/