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  1. Eccer's Avatar

    Eccer said:

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    Looking back through endless seams
    Seems I had forgotten, this view
    These wonders I have yet
    Seen, through and me
    This righteousness of here I am
    At night, heading for work?

    Why?

    I get teary, looking up
    Knowing, knowing that other day
    Another moment lapsed and
    Catched at the brink of its time
    Beautiful, isn't it?









    Last edited by Eccer; 09-22-2013 at 01:34 AM.
     
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    Eccer said:

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    Title suggestions anyone? I got the inspiration when I walked out of my house and saw the stars peering through the clouds. Was quite a...special moment.

    Edit: I might add a few more stanzas. A work in process!
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Endless Seams......or Peering Through Endless Seams.I like it,but would enjoy more!