Gone

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  1. Taylor Bell said:

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    I hate the felling of pain
    A little bit more and I’ll probably go insane
    But one look at your face and I know it’s alright
    That no matter what I’ll make it through tonight
    One touch from you will take the pain away
    For me to deal with some other day
    I am the dark you are the light
    Somehow together just seems right
    The love so strong the kisses deep
    You don’t have to worry cause I’m your to keep
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    This is too similar to World of Pain for me to enjoy,again,this soon.But,if I'd read it a month from now,it'd be cool.But not back to back.
     
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    amaryn said:

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    Haven't read others of yours yet, so this one is the first.
    Classic theme: "I am the dark, you are the light".
    Have to disagree with you, because I can't accept people to make themselves too dependant
    on others. Always kick yourself in the ***, I say.
    Otherwise: welcome and keep writing! I'll follow you!