What You Need

Thread: What You Need

Tags: break up, romance
  1. Anzac said:

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    What You Need

    She summoned all her powers of persuasion - yeah
    She hustled and cajoled her way into his arms – oh yeah
    She unleashed all her aura of seduction – yeah yeah
    She led him into her sensual charms – oh yeah yeah

    She held his face in her trembling hands
    She gazed into his eyes with madness
    I want you so bad, do you understand me
    I want you so bad, don’t you want me

    She moaned I want you so bad, do you understand me
    I want you so bad , don’t you want me me me

    He loved her cherry lips when she bit them
    He wanted to kiss her till sun down
    He got lost in her eyes that sparkled like a gem
    But he wasn't the kind of guy to stick around

    After the long hot session she exhaled I still want you
    I want you during the day , I hope you want me too

    He pulled her close and spoke slowly
    Girl I don’t know how we got here so fast
    Call me names cause I know I am guilty
    But I don’t think I could make this last

    She cried we just made love so madly
    Now you say you don't want me
    What a horrible thing to say to a lady

    Cherry lips and warm emerald green eyes
    Creamy skin and a bright sunshine smile
    Like the white keys of a grand piano
    But he just wanted her love on the go

    He said I want you to go on without me
    I don’t know how we got here so fast
    Call me names cause I know I am guilty
    But I don’t think I could make this last

    She shouted it's not fair what you did
    I want you so bad but you don't want me
    You only want what you need
    Only what you need
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Anzac.......I see you've been a member since Feb.2011!How have I not been aware of you and your unique outlook?Well,not totally unique,but a great one,nonetheless!This is sexy and had me wanting to read the next line like a 15 year old!Great song!
     
  3. Anzac said:

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    Wow ! I have been writing on and off for a while. I try to relate to my life experiences. Thanks very much for your support and feedback !
     
  4. Peter Both said:

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    Storywise this is a great lyric. Like Doug says, you keep on reading the lines, anxious to know how the story unfolds. I have trouble, however, imagining the music that goes with it. Could you give us a clue what kind of music you have in mind. The first two stanzas sound like hot and steamy R&B. Then you seem to move into singer-songwriter territory. I'm really curious!
     
  5. Anzac said:

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    Thank you for the feedback Peter ! I had a 70's Soul tune in my mind when I started writing.