When Is Enough, Enough

This has turned into something
I never thought would be
So much complication
I can barely breathe
And I don't know If this will end
Constant roller coaster with no end
"Chorus"
I'm watching the fire begin to burn
I'm wondering if this will ever end
I feel the desire to forgive
But when is enough
Enough


Everything's spinning around again
And we are going nowhere my friend
Constantly flowing on the track
Never ending we got inertia pushing back
Some how or another we have to find
A way to escape these confines
"Chorus"
I'm watching the fire begin to burn
I'm wondering if this will ever end
I feel the desire to forgive
But when is enough
Enough
"Bridge"
Rolling down again
Rolling with no end
No break to be found
Just the smooth
And the rough
How can we escape
This hell
It's only matter of time
Before we fall
"Chorus"
I'm watching the fire begin to burn
I'm wondering if this will ever end
I feel the desire to forgive
But when is enough
Enough
When is enough
Enough
When is enough
Enough

Love the brigade and chorus.........verses,not so much.

What do you not like about it, the content? The structure? Just let me know I think this song is a nice seed that could grow into a good song.

Originally Posted by Johnb31

What do you not like about it the content? The structure? Just let me know I think this song is a nice seed that could grow I to a good song.

John,JohnJohn.........I said I Loved the bridge and the chorus.I merely "like" the verses.It's not what I "don't like" it's your song,after all.I just think the bridge and chorus are on a different level,a more memorable one.I think the chorus Is so dynamic that it's hard to match the verses up with the proper intensity.......if that makes any sense!If you were able to...........Wow!

Haha this one came at me in a fit of anger I just started writing a storm I'm just wondering if I could make the verses better like make them pop a little more if you know what I mean.

Originally Posted by Johnb31

Haha this one came at me in a fit of anger I just started writing a storm I'm just wondering if I could make the verses better like make them pop a little more if you know what I mean.

If I can be of any help,I'll surely be there.....let me think it over and get back to you.If I can suggest something,I will!

I think we have both learned there is no end to this crazy roller coaster we are witnessing right before our eyes. It is so frustrating.
And enough is enough. I just wish some people could see that.
I love you! And I love how passionate you are about me, and the situations in my life and yours.
You are my biggest inspiration and you amaze me everyday. I'm so proud of you.