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    If your dead to how your living, if your numb to how you feel
    If your waiting for an answer, on why? to just reveal
    If you think that what you write, will make you big some day
    Then your going on a journey, that may not go your way

    If you live life as a dreamer, if you hope without a care
    If your seeing names in big bright lights, that are not even there
    If you cling to all believers do, you might just make it through
    If you your ears close to doubters, your dreams just might come true

    Chorus

    But its a hard world to be in, its a hard life to live
    You have to choose what to sacrafice, you have to choose what to give
    Its a time for reflection, have you got what it takes
    There is no time for regrets, no time for mistakes....

    If lyrics are inside your soul, if your very being lives a song
    If writing is your beating heart, you surely wont go wrong
    It has to be your essence, your every breath you take
    It needs to play a melody, that never feels its fake

    If you feel that you can do it, then try and try again
    Trust in all you write, and then trust and trust again
    Every ones a critic, everyone knows best, advice is worth nothing
    Your the only one, who knows how to lyric the best

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    But its a hard world to be in, its a hard life to live
    You have to choose what to sacrafice, you have to choose what to give
    Its a time for reflection, have you got what it takes
    There is no time for regrets, no time for mistakes....
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    CAT,I like this a lot.But.......I think if you edited some of the words it'd be easier to read/sing.I had a hard time reciting the verses without taking a breath.In a song,you have to place your breaths at the right time or you may mess up a verse.Anyhow,this message should be heard,but most of all sung!
     
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    "everyone knows best, advice is worth nothing"

    Cat, therefore I won't say more than: the content is excellent, just smoothen the lines.

    It will be a smasher then!
     
  4. CAT69 said:

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    You are so right it needs a lot of work on it yet x