See you in tears

Whyd you fall for a man
With wandering eyes
Hiding heartache and violence
With bullshit and lies
Trust me once shame on you
Trust me twice shame on me
Im the one that you want
Not the one that you need
Each night i do whiskey
Adderall and weed

And some nights ill hate you
Just cause youre here
But tonight with this stranger
Ill break your heart
Just to see you in tears

It dont make me a man
To hurt you this way
But im young and im foolish
And i like to play games
One day ill wake up
And realize what ive done
I betrayed the one
Who did me no wrong
Then ill cry cry cry
Like that johnny cash song

And some nights ill hate you
Just cause youre here
But tonight with this stranger
Ill break your heart
Just to see you in tears

I chose lust over love
An im paying the price
Sometimes you get snakeyes
When rolling those dice
Sometimes you lose
The best you ever had
Sometimes youre left
Cold alone and sad
Its my own damn fault
I didnt know what i had

And some nights ill hate you
Tho i know youre not here
I curse the night with that stranger
I broke your heart
Just to see you in tears

You always had my back
And i knew it wasnt fair
But i broke those vows
Just to shows i didnt care
I broke our vows
Just to show i didnt care

definitely can tell where you are coming from in your lyrics.. Id like to see/ hear less about whiskey weed and adderal to be honest..maybe try to look at writing things in a different manner..maybe say something like..."been a while since i've been on the business end of a let down" or " been abusing my life with all those broken bottles and dried up dreams"..both ways give the listen the opportunity to visualize and put themselves in your shoes..even if they've never drank smoked or eaten adderall...but i gaurntee everyone has hard times and can relate to it if you say it differenly

just my 2 cents...i feel like if we are writing we need to keep it as simple as possible but can get very creative in our simplicity..Hope that makes sense..

keep writing brother!!!

Hey thanks for the feedback. Its funny that of all the lines in this the one that stood out to yiu is the onr about weed and adderall. Ive never done either. I just write the words that come to me.

your welcome...ya those lines for whatever reason really stood out...maybe thats a good thing? thanks for the comments inmy other posts..

keep writing bro

Killer song!!!

You are,without doubt,one of the best verse writers I've ever had the pleasure of reading.Your rhymes are spot on and your story telling second to none.You really should try to find a band to write for,the songs you present are too good to just be read by the few at ATL!