Obviously A Lie (150th post on ATL)

This like the tittle says is my 150th song I just wrote it with a lot of emotion and anger rushing through me so have fun reading and thank you for giving my lyrics an audience.

You say that you love me
But I don't know why
You push and you shove me
With words not might
I can't seem to understand you
With everything you do
You're too far gone
and I can't hold on
"Chorus "
Look up too the angels
Look up too the sky
You say that you're a Christain
I think that's a lie
I can't look in you're direction
Without feeling like I died
So why do you say
I love you
When it's obviously a lie


One moment you're proud
The next you're not
It's seems as if I can't
Ever be good enough
I make one mistake
You are outraged
It's seems like I can't be
Everything perfect
Everything you want me to be
"Chorus "
Look up too the angels
Look up too the sky
You say that you're a Christain
I think that's a lie
I can't look in you're direction
Without feeling like I died
So why do you say
I love you
When it's obviously a lie
"Bridge"
L..I......e
I'm tired of the Li......es
Every second you
Stay around me
I feel like I am
Breaking
I'm breaking up inside
Every time that you lie
I'm breaking up inside
Every time that you lie
Look up
Look up
"Chorus "
Look up too the angels
Look up too the sky
You say that you're a Christain
I think that's a lie
I can't look in you're direction
Without feeling like I died
So why do you say
I love you
When it's obviously a lie

Congrats on your 150th song, John! And it's a good one! The anger you put in this song really rocks off the screen.

This is,to me,an odd song.The verses that rhyme are great,but then the ones that don't.........leave me hanging.Usually a song has rhymes or goes in the non-rhyme direction.This goes both ways,so I'm a bit confused.Anyhow, congrats on your great output.

Yeah it is kind of weird that way, if only you could hear it in my head haha it works there just maybe not reality yet. I'm sure when I put it to music and find a good melody the lyrics will change. I love to bend and stretch words when I sing too so on paper it may not rhyme but when I sing it it somehow works it's weird haha. Thank you Doug your a huge part of a majority of my songs I've posted ,you have really encouraged me to keep posting even when I have questioned if it is even worth.

Maybe,if you're lucky,someone will steal your lyrics,make a hit song,and you can sue them and get rich!That's the only reward of posting here,I can think of!After all........World-fame may start here................

This. Is. Awesome.