Temporary Fix (Feb. 2013)

I'll die trying to get inside your mind,

Dreaming of the places that no one else can find.

Seeing past your clouded eyes, I have come to know,

That it's the twisted thoughts in your head where your feeling show.

Your world is such a beauty, and I am yet a beast,

Creeping from the outside like an unknown disease.

You disorient me, making me confused,

Searching for the answers, but leaving me no clues.


Will you justify your answers, and back up what you say?

Or leave me down and lonely, wishing you would stay?

Please don't give up on me, you are my only wish,

The one I dream about at night, the one I long to kiss.




Now I'm high from the pleasure, this temporary fix,

I know that hen you leave again the clock will slowly tick.

Endlessly I'm waiting, waiting for your voice,

That brings me out of darkness, and back to all the noise.

Hopelessly I'll follow, yearning for your world,

Breathing just a little slower, living in a blur.

We know the winner takes it, the winner takes it all,

But what if we're all losing and we all take the fall?


Will you justify your answers, and back up what you say?

Or leave me down and lonely, wishing you would stay?

Please don't give up on me, you are my only wish,

The one I dream about at night, the one I long to kiss.



The beauty in you's sleeping, longing to be awake.

And I am right here with you, like a feeling you can't shake.

You sleep with a dagger, worried for your life.

While my shadow lies outside your window, ready for a fight.

I'm waiting for an answer, I'll wait forevermore,

But don't be surprised when you hear me knock on your door.

I really love the tittle it's so original haha ;-). I love the flow in this song it's amazing and your rhymes are top notch I love the last line great ending. Favorite line "We know the winner takes it, the winner takes it all,But what if we're all losing and we all take the fall?" That's a really fantastic line and so true great job!

Originally Posted by Johnb31

I really love the tittle it's so original haha ;-). I love the flow in this song it's amazing and your rhymes are top notch I love the last line great ending. Favorite line "We know the winner takes it, the winner takes it all,But what if we're all losing and we all take the fall?" That's a really fantastic line and so true great job!

Something about everything I wrote in February not having a title..I swear! Haha :P Thank you so much, I appreciate it That's actually one of my favorite lines too

Temporary Fix...........puts this song in the right box.

Awesome job...for me when I read a lot of the lyrics on this site it's hard to visualize and hear the lyrics to music....not sure why but it is...not with this song though..I can hear it as soon as I read the title.(I agree with Doug).. The chorus really stands out as well.. Not sure if you watched a bad goodbye on my YouTube but I feel like we were coming from the same place

Keep writing
Jeff

Originally Posted by coral834

Awesome job...for me when I read a lot of the lyrics on this site it's hard to visualize and hear the lyrics to music....not sure why but it is...not with this song though..I can hear it as soon as I read the title.(I agree with Doug).. The chorus really stands out as well.. Not sure if you watched a bad goodbye on my YouTube but I feel like we were coming from the same place

Keep writing
Jeff

Ahh yes, I agree! And thanks a ton