Stupid Poem For A Stupid Someone (5/25/10)

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  1. Kerri Faye Yates's Avatar

    Kerri Faye Yates said:

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    Hurting yet amused.
    Feeling broken and abused.
    Confused as my heart pounds.
    Out loud my sobbing sounds.
    Lies, all lies, no use trying to fight.
    I thought that you were my light.
    You said you loved me. and I believe.
    Can't believe I'm so naive.
    Falling for you has hurt me, bad.
    Left me all alone and sad.
    Now I'm wondering what to do,
    When all along all I wanted was you.
    ~Kerri Faye
     
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    All you need is a little reworking and I hear an old fashioned rocker!Great rhymes,that's something you do so well!
     
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    Kerri Faye Yates said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe View Post
    All you need is a little reworking and I hear an old fashioned rocker!Great rhymes,that's something you do so well!
    I thought about going back to them, they are sooo old though haha. And so short, so I decided to give up :P
    ~Kerri Faye