I'm not finished but just wanted a little feedback. Does it sound ok so far? I came up with it 5 minutes ago so it's still kinda raw.
One look into your eyes
And it was all rainbows
And clear blue skies
I was putty in your hands
Was that part of your plan?
My heart is in danger
I can barely feel it
Beat beat beating in my chest
I gave you my very best
But you threw me out
Like an unwanted guest
You just hung up the phone
And now I'm listening to the tone
Trying not to pull my hair
While running up the stairs
Why did you have to say that stuff?
Why am I never good enough?
My heart is in danger
I can barely feel it
Beat beat beating in my chest
I gave you my very best
But you threw me out
Like an unwanted guest