My First Music Forum And Song And Lyrics And Clip :)

Hi,
My name is Amir from Tel-Aviv and I LOVE music!
I'm here to here your opinion about my music (good and bad) and hope to learn from it.

Here is my new song (and clip), First time i'm uploaded to youtube.

hope you like it

Lyrics:
All she said you and me
All she said meant to be
All she gave me reason to bealive
When she said she will never live

Where are you now
What are you doing to me
Where are you now

All she said hold me tiet
When we stay up all night
All she said trust in me
All I have Is what she said to me

Where are you now
What are you doing to me
Where are you now

The wind you feel I feel it to
The sky you see Is not just for you
We are on the same road Don't turn your head away
Maybe some day....

Where are you now
What are you doing to me
Where are you now

The Song:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BUmkbv-v-vI

Tnx
Amir

Both the song and the clip are very professional. I think the whole package works better than the bare lyrics. The emotion comes across very well when you listen to the song. One little thing: I noticed that you have quite an accent. I don't know if that's a big deal. Maybe it will sound charming to a native speaker. I am Dutch, so I know from experience how hard it is to get rid of your accent ;-)

Tnx,

I do have some accent, I hope is not too much... but it still working and even special I think...

Waiting for another comments people

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BUmkbv-v-vI

Tnx again

Amir,
I just posted a comment that said "you're in the right place,this is LYRICS REVIEW".(in response to the poster saying "melodies are not his strong suit")You,on the other hand,write,sing,and put together a great package.........I'm impressed!As far as "your accent"
If I'm not mistaken Elvis had one (southern) and so did the Beatles (English)although they did sing with a sound that made it irrelevant!I think your song could be sung by anyone.It's a good one,regardless of the accent.

WOW, If you insert to the comment .... "Elvis, Beatles.." is enough for me

And maybe it has something special in some way because of the accent, lol

Tnx allot

Truely brilliant, been away for a while and coming back to read amazing stuff like this makes me wonder why I left

Congratulations and well done on an amazing song.

This is super catchy and I really enjoyed the video!

wooow, thanks guys, that very exciting to here

It give me the push to keep on doing music and that cool.

Tnx

please more comments people