My new song, please Enter...

Hi All, I have a new song in English that i'll really like that Native English speaker people will hear it.

Please listen and comment.

The song:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BUmkbv-v-vI

Tnx.

And Lyrics off course...

All she said you and me
All she said meant to be
All she gave me reason to bealive
When she said she will never live

Where are you now
What are you doing to me
Where are you now

All she said hold me tiet
When we stay up all night
All she said trust in me
All I have Is what she said to me

Where are you now
What are you doing to me
Where are you now

The wind you feel I feel it to
The sky you see Is not just for you
We are on the same road Don't turn your head away
Maybe some day....

Where are you now
What are you doing to me
Where are you now

Tnx

This is great! I really like the video! I would love to cover this song!

Well, it's the same song you've posted earlier... But it's very good. The 'goosebumps moment' for me is at 1:58 when the bridge kicks in (the emotional singing made me think of the song "Welcome To the Machine" by Pink Floyd). Lyrically it is not a masterpiece, but the combination of the lyrics, the musical composition, your strong singing voice and the pristine production make it something really worthwhile. Most international top hits are not masterpieces, lyrically speaking. The one word that comes to mind is 'professional'. I think the song is 'radio-friendly' too. Have you already played this song to music pro's?

Tnxs guys, What do you mean you will like to cover this song? (sound good)

*If it's remind pink-Floyd to you, so it's good enough for me

Originally Posted by AmirMaor

Tnxs guys, What do you mean you will like to cover this song? (sound good)

*If it's remind pink-Floyd to you, so it's good enough for me

For instance, lots of bands perform well known songs that other bands wrote

I love the song and the video captures the emotion perfectly. Thank you for posting this here ^_^

tnx, man. this is very exciting to hear.

I'm happy that my work is working for you.

Do you have something to hear too, for me?