My song Lyrics, what you think?

I posted here this before but it goes down fast...

All she said you and me
All she said meant to be
All she gave me reason to bealive
When she said she will never live

Where are you now
What are you doing to me
Where are you now

All she said hold me tiet
When we stay up all night
All she said trust in me
All I have Is what she said to me

Where are you now
What are you doing to me
Where are you now

The wind you feel I feel it to
The sky you see Is not just for you
We are on the same road Don't turn your head away
Maybe some day....

Where are you now
What are you doing to me
Where are you now

The song:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BUmkbv-v-vI

Tnx

Good start. Bring in some concrete images.

"Bring in some concrete images" - sorry, I didn't understand what you mean here...

Tnx for the comment