End of time

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  1. Juhnu said:

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    Okey its my second song and it didnt take long to make this and i know there must be tons of typos since im not so good in english but i still hope you like it And i know all of you wont like it so please leave a comment and tell me how to make it better. All new ideas are welcome





    Time is moving slowly every time i think of you
    hoping you were here with me but i know its too late
    all the things i didnt say are making me cry
    i just wish that i could see you one last time

    So many days, so many nights
    every time i close my eyes
    i see you there by my side
    holding my hand till the end of time

    I remember it like yesterday when we were together
    everything seemed easier when we had eachothers
    but now im alone and cant get you of my mind
    knowing that i cant see you anymore

    So many days, so many nights
    every time i close my eyes
    i see you there by my side
    holding my hand till the end of time

    I know that you are gone, but you will always have special place in my heart
    even tho you are gone you always live in our memories
    no matter where i go, i always see you in my dreams
    and those dreams wont leave me alone, i think thats because i cant let you go
    those feeling we share are stronger than death
    theres one more thing to do and its to search my way back to you

    So many days, so many nights
    every time i close my eyes
    i see you there by my side
    holding my hand till the end of time
    and after tonight i know things will never be the same
     
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    AmirMaor said:

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    I like it, I wonder if the line aren't too long?

    Good work