amaryn: my poems of 2014

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    amaryn said:

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    R.I.P Jaggers' girlfriend Miss Scott

    untill all waves
    have died down
    and the sea no more spreads rumours
    of unknown content
    life will remain a mystery to all
    and unbearable for some



    @amaryn 2014
     
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    Nicely said......too bad it had to be said.
    Terry Reid retweeted your tweet!How cool is that!!!
    Last edited by Doug Denslowe; 03-18-2014 at 07:34 PM.
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe View Post
    Nicely said......too bad it had to be said.
    Terry Reid retweeted your tweet!How cool is that!!!

    Absolutely cool. Never expected he'd react
     
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    BTW: does anyone know what "blog this post" means? Blog where? On lyricsForum , that seems unlikely! ew lay-out puzzles me!
     
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    a bee sat
    on the warm skin of the deer
    enjoying the sun
    silence its company
    innocence complete
     
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    she mumbled words
    she didnot even understand
    a turned off engine
    rusting into oblivion
     
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    Love the last two poems you posted!If there was a Like button........consider it pushed!!!
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by amaryn View Post
    BTW: does anyone know what "blog this post" means? Blog where? On lyricsForum , that seems unlikely! ew lay-out puzzles me!
    ah...........NO!
     
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    thanks Doug! Yes, these buttons don't work anymore and in a way its annoying. They wanted to be different form fb.
    Tomorrow I am travelling again, but on monday I have time to put more here.

    Oh....if Forum only would sort things out swiftly!
     
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    nothing
    is a word
    demanding
    the fullfillment
    of the feeling of
    emptiness
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    [QUOTE=amaryn;1019263]nothing
    is a word
    demanding
    the fullfillment
    Of emptiness
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    I took out a couple of words I thought "clogged" the poem!
     
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    thanks Doug,

    proposal accepted, FloBro!
    I edited this poem of mine on Twitter /#HeartSoup Poems
     
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    wind


    wind
    is nothing
    but the messenger
    of
    gossipping birchtrees


    amaryn 2014
     
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    amaryn said:

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    she swam
    in an ocean of hugs
    and didnot want
    to come ashore anymore


    amaryn 2014
     
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    amaryn said:

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    passion
    is a rainbow
    dressed in vermillion red
    colours
     
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    amaryn said:

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    when work is done we'd like to meet
    in a place called paradise
    so, girls, beware, dress smartly please
    use make up for your eyes

    there's music ,sure, for everyone
    black metal, classic, jazz
    and what you have done in life, my friends,
    with rocking lips: confess

    there's lots of sun which does no harm,
    no allergies to fear
    all around move gentle men
    who don't cause trouble here

    nobody fights, nobody spits
    the place is full of fun
    forgiven are silly mistakes
    which everyone has done

    it is a dream, this paradise
    a dream for you and me
    will it come true? maybe, my friend
    'cause there I want to be
     
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    picture of springtime

    frail ladybirds their faces so pale
    listening to stories of a nightingale
    high in a tree , close to the beach
    it has something in store for each

    farmers ploughing the defrosted land
    with the help of horses which do understand
    now is the time to enjoy the sun
    springtime has surely begun!



    amaryn 2014
     
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    Now this batch I LIKE......Wind,passion,paradise,pictures of springtime are all great pieces both put a smile on my face and let me think.I'm glad you're giving your poems titles,as it was hard to give them credit with no name!
     
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    amaryn said:

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    the girl
    at an orange
    which made her think
    of sunsets
    she cradled in her arms
     
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    the uncertainty of life
    loomed over them
    like unreal shadows and a day without sun
    became a scary visitor