Maris

Thread: Maris

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  1. Tomatomic said:

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    you're so cold
    you suck the life from me
    I don' believe your real
    a face like ice,
    a stare that melts steel
    my heart will fade and never be healed

    dear, I can't take any more beatings
    won't survive any more bleeding's
    I've nothing left to give to you....

    Maris!
    please don't hurt me again
    Maris!!
    this love is killing me
    MAris!
    ten years too long
    Maris! why'd you have to be so cruel.....
    MARIS!

    this is war
    your like a great storm
    battering me down
    for a beast so thin
    I can see the hatred burning
    destroying everything around...!

    *****, you keep worming your way in
    more dangerous than ****ing sin
    why will nothing ever kill you!!!

    Maris!
    get out of my life now
    Maris!!
    you can't take a hint clearly
    Maris!!
    no-one could love someone like,
    Maris!! Maris, a ***** and a *****....!!!!!!

    I curse her!!
    rue the day I ****iNG met her!!!
    this witch will haunt me forever!
    this ***** will hurt me forever!!!
    can't seem to see the light
    if I end it all will i feel right!!
    the pain! THE PAIN!!! MARIS!!!!!!!!!!
    **** you!!!!

    I'm finally rid of you
    Maris!
    I've found love again!
    Maris!!
    go back to the hell that spawned you
    so they too can really hate you
    goodbye forever and ever!!!
    see you in hell..!!!!!
    MAris.
     
  2. Jim Colyer's Avatar

    Jim Colyer said:

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    Great! You really zero in on your feelings. I've been cursed with women like this.
     
  3. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Atomic One.......to say I was impressed with this would be an understatement!Welcome back!You've been writing more than me,lately!It's hard to write if NOTHING is happening!Take care,good to see you're still around.
     
  4. Tomatomic said:

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    cheers guys!!! and yeah doug i'm still here!!! terribly hard to get rid of!!!