"Beast Known As Anguish"

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  1. BackInBlack's Avatar

    BackInBlack said:

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    Take deep breaths
    And slowly count to ten
    This feeling starts to eclipse
    My mind once again

    Just when I think that I
    May be able to tame this
    The beast opens it's eyes
    The beast known as anguish

    I start to tremble
    And shake as I turn red
    If only it was as simple
    As being calm instead

    Just when I think that I
    May be able to tame this
    The beast opens it's eyes
    The beast known as anguish

    When it consumes me
    My wrath must be vented
    I see what it's doing to me
    This arcane feeling is unrelenting

    Just when I think that I
    May be able to tame this
    The beast opens it's eyes
    The beast known as anguish
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Wow.......this is very good writing.I say writing because,to me, it's poetry.I'll be back to read this again,many times.I'll probably have more to say when I return.......to the scene of the crime........(I was trying to be poetic!)
    Last edited by Doug Denslowe; 02-14-2014 at 12:29 AM.
     
  3. BackInBlack's Avatar

    BackInBlack said:

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    Thank you Doug!