First Lyrics In English!

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  1. AmirMaor's Avatar

    AmirMaor said:

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    Hi, i'll happy for your opinion on my song in English.

    Lyrics:
    All she said you and me
    All she said meant to be
    All she gave me reason to bealive
    When she said she will never live

    Where are you now
    What are you doing to me
    Where are you now

    All she said hold me tiet
    When we stay up all night
    All she said trust in me
    All I have Is what she said to me

    Where are you now
    What are you doing to me
    Where are you now

    The wind you feel I feel it to
    The sky you see Is not just for you
    We are on the same road Don't turn your head away
    Maybe some day....

    Where are you now
    What are you doing to me
    Where are you now


    The song:
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BUmkbv-v-vI

    Tnx
     
  2. BackInBlack's Avatar

    BackInBlack said:

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    Since I assume English isn't your first language I'm going to say that you've done okay here. Keep working at it. Your grammar and word usage is a little off but I still caught the intended feeling (I think) of this song. Keep working harder!
     
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    AmirMaor said:

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    Tnx BackInBlack I will work harder and you geuss right, I'm not a Native English speaker, you can hear it I geuss in my singing very well