Life Is Too Short

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  1. Johnb31's Avatar

    Johnb31 said:

    Default Life Is Too Short

    You're scared to erase
    All the things you couldn't be
    And now you're trapped in your stardust
    Your stardust galaxy
    In this world you are afraid
    To be anything
    Trapped within your stardust galaxy
    Trying to believe
    "Chorus"
    Life is too short for you
    To hold on to the past
    Life is too short for you
    To make it last
    You've got to learn to move on
    And live for tomorrow
    And stop your
    Troublesome attitude
    It's what you got to do


    You're lost in the sky
    You're lost in your minds eye
    Now you're trapped in your stardust
    Your stardust galaxy
    You awake to the darkness
    Blinded by your dreams
    Holding on to a moment
    You slip away it seems
    "Chorus"
    Life is too short for you
    To hold on to the past
    Life is too short for you
    To make it last
    You've got to learn to move on
    And live for tomorrow
    And stop your
    Troublesome attitude
    It's what you got to do
    What you got to do
    "Bridge"
    Imagination never seemed alright
    But now it's all that you have
    Trapped in a moment
    So long past
    It's amazing you're still here
    "Chorus"
    Life is too short for you
    To hold on to the past
    Life is too short for you
    To make it last
    You've got to learn to move on
    And live for tomorrow
    And stop your
    Troublesome attitude
    It's what you got to do

    Stop living in the distance yesterday
    And learn to live for today
    Before you slip away
    Last edited by Johnb31; 05-03-2014 at 01:16 PM.
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
  2. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Really good!not much more to say.......I like it!
     
  3. Andrew w said:

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    Gotta move on. Good advice. life is too short to hold on to the past. Stardust galaxy. Put all these sentimental guidelines together and it SPELLS WINNER...Nice job....Thanks for the nice flowing wisdom that needs to be heeded by hearts old and new. AW
     
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    Johnb31 said:

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    Thanks Doug and Andrew w, for the comments I greatly appreciate them. Andrew w: I agree with you too many people including myself hold on to the past, living everyday remembering all the things they couldn't do, or all the things they could do but no longer can. From my observations I can see that we often create this fantasy where we believe we were something greater than we actually were and in the present we still feel we are that same person, the opposite can be said as well. This hints to the stardust galaxy a fantasy land that can only exist in our minds.
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
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    Jim Colyer said:

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    I like the reflection. Life is short during good times. It is long during bad times.
     
  6. pq92k said:

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    The first two lines are well-written ("You're scared to erase/All the things you couldn't be"). The chorus should be rewritten as it is cliched.