here's my life

this is my first rap would like feed back, positive and negative everything helps!!

[Intro]
Yeah,
It’s me,
I’m finally here,
Ready to tell you all my life,
Let’s compare my life with yours,
Let’s compare how hard it is for me to handle this pain,
With how easy you have it,
You goin through life getting everything handed to you,
[Hook]
If people like you spent just one day in Tha shoes of people like me,
You wouldn’t be able to handle it would,
[Verse 1]
Yeah,
My life’s ****ed,
The times struggling with Tha pain,
I have those rhymes,
I have the words,
I have this page,
Putting my pain in these raps is all I have,
If I didn’t have this page,
If I didn’t have these rhymes,
I wouldn’t have made it through,
No,
I wouldn’t like to know where I’d be without it,
[hook]
Yeah,
If people like you spent jus one day in the shoes of people like me,
You wouldn’t be able to handle it would you,
[Verse 2]
Yeah,
Being bullied,
Being tormented,
Not being able to be what others do,
Not bein able to stop the pain,
The cores,
The reason for it all,
Not having the friends to help me,
Not havin the support I need,
If it wasn’t for rap,
If I didn’t put my pain to this page,
Where would I be?
Would I of made it to where I am now?
No,
I would never have got through,
[Hook]
If people like you spent jus one day in the shoes of people like me,
You would be able to handle it would you,
[verse 3]
Yeah,
Imam stand strong,
Never to take the easy way out,
No,
Never giving up,
Never letting it pull me down,
I can always get through the pain,
The times I think it’s too hard,
The times it tries to take over,
But no,
I will always fight to the end,
For as long as I have this page nothing can stop me!

Sound from a deep place, well done