"Garden of Eden"

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  1. BackInBlack's Avatar

    BackInBlack said:

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    I've always had
    A problem with authority
    It's not that I'm bad
    It's just that the majority
    Of those in control are hypocritical thieves
    I'm a little mad
    At this backwards system
    And I am so glad
    That I gained the wisdom
    To know that it's the snake that always leads

    Don't you know
    We're still in the Garden of Eden
    It's desolate and old
    And we don't want to admit or believe it
    But there's nowhere to go
    Because we're still in the Garden of Eden

    We don't want to believe it
    But we're still in the Garden of Eden

    Underneath this sun
    Something is just not right
    When all's said and done
    It will finally be shown in the light
    And the pigs will be known for who they are
    I'm a little angry
    At how everything is going
    How can you blame me
    Because my red is finally showing
    When I'm not the one who took it too far?

    Don't you know
    We're still in the Garden of Eden
    It's desolate and old
    And we don't want to admit or believe it
    But there's nowhere to go
    Because we're still in the Garden of Eden

    We don't want to believe it
    But we're still in the Garden of Eden

    We never left
    It just changed
    There was no theft
    We just changed
    It cannot go back
    To the way it was
    Don't even ask
    This is all that's left for us...

    Don't you know
    We're still in the Garden of Eden
    It's desolate and old
    And we don't want to admit or believe it
    But there's nowhere to go
    Because we're still in the Garden of Eden

    We don't want to believe it
    But we're still in the Garden of Eden
     
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    BackInBlack said:

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    No thoughts on this piece?
     
  3. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Funny.....I go away for one day and you write two masterpieces,this being one,the other one Hades in Resprise.No thoughts...........
    F@€K Em!I'll tell you what I think!
     
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    BackInBlack said:

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    I know you do Doug and I appreciate every comment, every suggestion and every random thought or proverb...
     
  5. amaryn's Avatar

    amaryn said:

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    The Garden Of Eden is a Massive Thought of Mankind and you have -correctly- put it in its own place:
    It has definitely changed and there's no going back.
    We have spoilt it too much, too often, too thoroughly and we are to blame.
    That the snakes lead us , I find a great comparison, as it has played such a big part in the Story of Paradise.
    Great, BackinBlack.
    I noticed this piece just now and I am proud of it!

    Thanks!
     
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    Thanks Amaryn