Hey guys! I picked up the first song I posted here and reviewed it...what's best the old or the new version?
OLD:
Sitting here thinking about it...again
been six months since I decided
to give it a try
But I'm still here doing nothing
More afraid then ever
It's so scary to me
should I just keep it a dream
inside my heart
or maybe I should quit those thoughts
and do what I still have'nt done
I cant keep being afraid
Have to belive its going to be alright
so much to gain
I've been living to long in its shadow
It's time to make it my life
Ch:
I wanna change my future
Not gonna waist this one life
that's been given to me
I must give it a chance
'cause this is my time
I'm gonna live my dream
NEW:
Still thinking about it
six months since i decided
to take the chance
More afraid then ever
I'm still right here doing nothing
It's so scary to me
should just keep it a dream
inside my heart
or should I quit those thoughts
do what I still haven't done
I won't hold back no more
it's gonna be alright
so much to gain
nothing at all to fear
it's time to make it my life
Ch:
Gonna change my future
Not waisting this one life
that's been given to me
Gotta give it a chance
'Cause this is my time
I'm living my dream