Every Woman Needs a Few Good Men

VERSE- Eb Fmin Ab Bb 2x
I am a married woman
Well provided for
I wear a five carat diamond ring
I drive a fancy car
I may be just a trophy
Some status symbol prize
What my husband does not know is that I
See a few good men on the side

CHORUS-same chords as verse
Every woman needs
A few
Good men
Ease her mind
Goddamn! What a man
I want to feel his hand on my
Tan line, I want to feel his
Yam on my spine

VERSE
Each morning I go trawling
By construction sites
I stop for lunch at the VFW
End up drinking their wine
Next I go off playing
With my tennis pro, when I come
Home my energizer bunny boy toy neighbor's
Rearing to go


BRIDGE- Cmin Fmin Bb Eb
So your therapist said I've been good for you
Now your husband has found us out
You say we'd better stop before things get messy
Rip the band aid off your hemorrhaging heart 2x

Bb
Still you say

CHORUS to fade

WOW! But first WELCOME to the group. I hope you'll like it here and that you'll find it helpfull. The first verse and the chorus. Loved it! I fell right in to the story. Could vividly see the story becoming alive in front of me. i don't know what you aim for,but to me this has country all over it.The second didn't flow as easly, but this has hit potensial!

This is a good write. I like the way you got this across.very nice.

Its honest, of the "brutally" variety. Not sure if its trying to portray the callousness of the stereotypical trophy wife or if its a blank statement of your own thoughts, either way it is thought provoking, if a little unsettling and repulsive. As far as writing itself, it is well phrased, mostly. One or two lines seem a bit wordy but maybe wit music itll work for you.

This is offensively genius.

Hi! This song (I supposed it is meant to be a song) has possibilities as
a follow up to Abbas Money Money Money, but taking it from the other corner of the eye:

It includes perspectives of boredom, as money doesn't guarantee happiness by any means.
The Vulgar Thought of Money-Makes-Happy has never worked ;
The writer(you) leaves totally open the question: How Many Men It Needs To Do The Job of making you at least
physically and superficially happy - nothing else-

Good song as far as it makes you think how superficially our world is these days

Keep writing. I am waiting!