Missin' life

Hi,this is a draft. It needs a whole lot more work,and I hope you guys will help me with your advice!


MISSIN' LIFE


To often we rush trough the day
Can't get to tomorrow soon enough
To busy to live our life
Rushing to and from
Doing everything all at once
Really doing nothing at all

One day you look at life
where did it go what did I do
it went to damn fast
there was so much
I was supposed to do another time
another day
it never came

Don't be that one
take your time and be
in the moment you are
feel your life smell the smells
breath in and out
make memories
Life is here and now
tomorrow comes soon enough

BRIDGE:
There's always a goal to reach
there's always a job to finish
there's always someone to meet
and always just one more thing
that has to be done

CHORUS:
Its such a shame
we're missin' "right now"
We're getting where we should be
long before we're supposed to
and has already left
when we are finally there
Missin' moments
that are golden
Missin' memories
that we could've made
Missin' life
yeah we're missin' life

Another well written song with a really good message as a little change maybe remove the "that has to be done " part from the bridge just didn't think it needed to be there and may help the flow but that might just be down to the way I read it

You wrote the song I couldnt a few weeks ago when I realized ive already been out of high school almost 6 years, I love it

Wow...thank you guys! I'm overwhelmed... Thank you for taking the time to give me the feedback...much appriciated!

I can relate. At the end of each day, I never know what I've accomplished. All I do is set things up for the next day.