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    BackInBlack said:

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    Broken like a vessel
    Meant to hold only waste
    Laughing like a devil
    Moonlight upon it's face

    I am the neck in the rope
    I am the god of the goats
    Seek here not for any hope
    This is where aspiration chokes

    Open like a blood vein
    Meant to bleed the victim dry
    There's now only one way
    This will ever end for you and I

    I am the neck in the rope
    I am the god of the goats
    Seek here not for any hope
    This is where aspiration chokes

    Ooh... There's a corpse in the fold

    Life will sodomize your mind
    And leave it gaping with filth
    You know this, yet every time
    You seek to deny your guilt
    Well I'm here as a constant reminder
    I'M HERE AS A CONSTANT BURDEN...
    Yes, surely you shall remember
    THE ONE THING THAT'S CERTAIN

    I am the neck in the rope
    I am the god of the goats
    Seek here not for any hope
    This is where aspiration chokes

    Ooh... There's a corpse in the fold
    THERE'S A CORPSE IN THE FOLD
    A CORPSE IN THE FOLD
    A CORPSE... IN... THE FOLD
     
  2. 2numbers said:

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    I like this! very good flow and rhymes! well done!
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    BIB......you really should find a/some bands to write for!You are one of,if not the best writer that's ever come to this site.When I go for my daily stroll,to keep fighting trim,I sometimes think of great lyrics.I've stopped writing them down because........why bother?The last song I posted got three replies and I asked for two of them!You are much younger,more talented,why not put your lyrics to use........I know,there a lot of "reasons" but I think you're that good.......I'd also like a small per cent if you take my advice!
     
  4. RockinRustle said:

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    You know blackie, lyrically your stuff reminds me of doyle, the guitarist from the misfits,'s new solo project, I mean that in the best way imaginable, this is dark, twisted, and beautiful
     
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    BackInBlack said:

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    Thank you 2numbers. I appreciate it!
     
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    BackInBlack said:

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    Doug, I wouldn't know where to start, or how to start to get my lyrics seen by people that actually want to use them. Any suggestions in that regard would be warmly welcome. Thanks for the praise, as always.
     
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    BackInBlack said:

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    @RockinRustle... Doyle you say? I'll have to look into that. Sounds cool. Thank you for your regard as well.
     
  8. trueperfectionisimperfect said:

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    As always a masterpiece written with style and seemingly effortless
     
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    BackInBlack said:

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    Thank you trueperfectionisimperfect... jesus... that's a long name. lol