I want to translate a song to Spanish, italian or Arabic

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    ELADITSA@HOTMAIL.COM said:

    Thumbs up I want to translate a song to Spanish, italian or Arabic

    Anyone would like to help me. The song is called Kokkino foustani. I have the music and I can send it to you instrumental. and send along the original. I'll write the words in Englsh of what it exactly sais, TRy to translate it. I want to do a demo and send this song in all these languages. why not.

    Its called Kokkino foustani The Red Dress. Its an old song but many like it and want to understand it.

    I already did the English translation.
    it sais

    The night is falling with a black veil and it is hungry for love (2)
    the city is so thirsty for lights action and festivities, (2(

    Refrain
    Put on the red dress that becomes you
    the one that so enlightens, your face a fire it glows,
    come and don't count the time thats passing
    youth is a gift that passes, too quickly as it comes
    aaaaaaaaaaaaa too quickly as it comes

    what should await us tommorow morning
    oh when the sun arises

    what love will be burning out,
    and what love shall be born.

    ends with refrain.
    THE GREEK AMERICAN TRANSLATOR : ) AND LYRIC WRITER IN GREEK AND ENGLISH.
     
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    emakaloulagani said:

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    syntoma konta sou for the italian translation despina! Signomi but today I don't have the time
    Τι θα γίνει αύριο κανείς δεν ξέρει,
    για αυτό την κάθε στιγμή θέλω από σήμερα εσύ
    να την γλεντάς και να τη ζείς με την ψυχή σου...
     
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    Ok here I am! And here is your Italian translation. By the way, is this song a rempetiko song? Who sings it?

    The night is falling with a black veil and it is hungry for love (2)
    La notte sta scendendo con un velo nero e ha fame d'amore

    the city is so thirsty for lights action and festivities, (2(
    la città ha tanta sete di luci, movimento e feste

    Refrain
    Put on the red dress that becomes you
    Indossa il vestito rosso che ti sta bene

    the one that so enlightens, your face a fire it glows,
    quello che ti risalta tanto, e il tuo viso risplende come un fuoco

    come and don't count the time thats passing
    Vieni e non misurare il tempo che passa

    youth is a gift that passes, too quickly as it comes
    la giovinezza è un dono che passa, così velocemente come arriva

    aaaaaaaaaaaaa too quickly as it comes
    aaaaaaaaaaaaa così velocemente come arriva

    what should await us tommorow morning
    cosa ci dovrebbe aspettare domani mattina

    oh when the sun arises
    oh quando il sole sorge

    what love will be burning out,
    and what love shall be born.

    I can't understand these last two sentences sorry... try to write the song in greek for me and maybe I'll make some sense out of them ok?
    Τι θα γίνει αύριο κανείς δεν ξέρει,
    για αυτό την κάθε στιγμή θέλω από σήμερα εσύ
    να την γλεντάς και να τη ζείς με την ψυχή σου...
     
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    ELADITSA@HOTMAIL.COM said:

    Wink yes, its a greek song H nhxta katevaini or kokkino foustani.

    Quote Originally Posted by emakaloulagani
    Ok here I am! And here is your Italian translation. By the way, is this song a rempetiko song? Who sings it?

    The night is falling with a black veil and it is hungry for love (2)
    La notte sta scendendo con un velo nero e ha fame d'amore
    Have in mind that I added in English "hungry for love" but originally the music with the voice in Greek only fits the night is falling with a black veil.

    the city is so thirsty for lights action and festivities, (2(
    la città ha tanta sete di luci, movimento e feste

    Refrain
    Put on the red dress that becomes you
    Indossa il vestito rosso che ti sta bene

    the one that so enlightens, your face a fire it glows,
    quello che ti risalta tanto, e il tuo viso risplende come un fuoco

    come and don't count the time thats passing
    Vieni e non misurare il tempo che passa

    youth is a gift that passes, too quickly as it comes
    la giovinezza è un dono che passa, così velocemente come arriva

    aaaaaaaaaaaaa too quickly as it comes
    aaaaaaaaaaaaa così velocemente come arriva

    what should await us tommorow morning
    cosa ci dovrebbe aspettare domani mattina

    oh when the sun arises
    oh quando il sole sorge

    what love will be burning out,
    and what love shall be born.

    I can't understand these last two sentences sorry... try to write the song in greek for me and maybe I'll make some sense out of them ok?
    THis is my English singalble translation but I'll type it in Greek now:



    KOKKINO FOUSTANI
    H NHXTA KATEVAINEI, ME MAVRO FERETSE (2)
    H POLI DIPSAZMENI GIA FOTA KAI SOUKSE (2)

    VALE TO KOKKINO FOUSTANI
    EKEINO POU SE KANEI
    NA MIAZIS PIRKAGIA

    ELA, KAI MI METRAS THN ORA
    TA NIATA EINAI DORA
    POU KAINE SAN FOTIA
    AAAAAAAAAAH POU KAINE SAN FOTIA

    TI NA MAS PERIMENEI AURIO TO PROI, (2)
    POIOS EROTAS PETHAINEI KAI PIOS THA GENITHI (2)

    IN GREEK FONT
    Η ΝΗΧΤΑ ΚΑΤΕΒΑΙΝΕΙ, ΜΕ ΜΑΥΡΟ ΦΕΡΕΤΣΕ (2)
    Η ΠΟΛΗ ΔΙΨΑΖΜΕΝΗ, ΓΙΑ ΦΩΤΑ ΚΑΙ ΣΟΥΞΕ (2)

    ΒΑΛΕ ΤΟ ΚΟΚΚΙΝΟ ΦΟΥΣΤΑΝΗ
    ΕΚΕΙΝΟ ΠΟΥ ΣΕ ΚΑΝΕΙ
    ΝΑ ΜΟΙΑΖΕΙΣ ΠΙΡΚΑΓΙΑ

    ΕΛΑ ΚΑΙ ΜΙΝ ΜΕΤΡΑΣ ΤΗΝ ΟΡΑ
    ΤΑ ΝΙΑΤΑ ΕΙΝΑΙ ΔΩΡΑ ΠΟΥ ΚΑΙΝΕ ΣΑΝ ΦΩΤΙΑ
    ΑΑΑΑΑΑΑΑΑΑΑΑΑ ΠΟΥ ΚΑΙΝΕ ΣΑΝ ΦΩΤΙΑ

    ΤΙ ΝΑ ΜΑΣ ΠΕΡΙΜΕΝΕΙ, ΑΥΡΙΟ ΤΟ ΠΡΩΙ (2)
    ΠΟΙΟΣ ΕΡΩΤΑΣ ΠΕΘΑΙΝΕΙ, ΚΑΙ ΠΙΟΣ ΤΗΑ ΓΕΝΝΗΘΕΙ (2)
    THE GREEK AMERICAN TRANSLATOR : ) AND LYRIC WRITER IN GREEK AND ENGLISH.
     
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    emakaloulagani said:

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    Thanks for your patience despina but now that I read the song in Greek I noticed that your English translation was the only possible one! It was my fault because I couldn't understand the last two verses... Anyway I think they can be translated like this:

    ΤΙ ΝΑ ΜΑΣ ΠΕΡΙΜΕΝΕΙ, ΑΥΡΙΟ ΤΟ ΠΡΩΙ (2)
    Cosa ci aspetta domani mattina

    ΠΟΙΟΣ ΕΡΩΤΑΣ ΠΕΘΑΙΝΕΙ, ΚΑΙ ΠΙΟΣ ΤΗΑ ΓΕΝΝΗΘΕΙ (2)
    Quale amore muore e quale nascerà (that's supposed to be a question right?)
    Τι θα γίνει αύριο κανείς δεν ξέρει,
    για αυτό την κάθε στιγμή θέλω από σήμερα εσύ
    να την γλεντάς και να τη ζείς με την ψυχή σου...
     
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    Hi:

    This is my Spanish translation. Hope it's OK!!


    El Vestido Rojo

    La noche cae con velo negro y está hambrienta de amor
    la ciudad está muy sedienta de luces, acción y fiestas.

    Pónte el vestido rojo que te favorece
    el que tanto te ilumina, tu rostro como llama resplandece
    Ven y no mires el tiempo que pasa
    la juventud es un regalo que se va tan rápido como llega
    demasiado rápido, según llega.

    ¿Qué nos aguarda mañana en la mañana
    oh, cuando salga el sol.
    qué amor morirá
    qué amor nacerá?
     
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    ELADITSA@HOTMAIL.COM said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sandy
    Hi:

    This is my Spanish translation. Hope it's OK!!


    El Vestido Rojo

    La noche cae con velo negro y está hambrienta de amor
    la ciudad está muy sedienta de luces, acción y fiestas.

    Pónte el vestido rojo que te favorece
    el que tanto te ilumina, tu rostro como llama resplandece
    Ven y no mires el tiempo que pasa
    la juventud es un regalo que se va tan rápido como llega
    demasiado rápido, según llega.

    ¿Qué nos aguarda mañana en la mañana
    oh, cuando salga el sol.
    qué amor morirá
    qué amor nacerá?
    WHEN I TRANSLATED THE SONG TO ENGLISH I ADDED THE FIRST SENTENCE TO FIT THE MUSIC BUT IN GREEK FOR EXAMPLE IT SAIS " THE NIGHT IS FALLING WITH A BLACK VEIL" THERE WAS AN EMPTY ORCHESTRA SO I FILLED IT IN WITH "AND IT IS HUNGRY FOR LOVE"
    I HAVE TO SEND YOU THE MUSIC SO YOU CAN SEE IF YOU CAN SING TO IT.
    I THANK YOU SO MUCH HOWEVER. I WOULD LIKE TO SING IT IN SPANISH ALSO. I GOT THE TRANSLATION IN ITALIAN SO I'M EXCITED. MUCHAS GRACIAS : )
    THE GREEK AMERICAN TRANSLATOR : ) AND LYRIC WRITER IN GREEK AND ENGLISH.
     
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    arabianofelix said:

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    the thing with arabic is the dialect problem.
    i kind of found it a problem while translating.
    i couldnt stick to one dialect, and if i used standard dialect, it wont be easy to do.

    The night is falling with a black veil and it is hungry for love (2)
    the city is so thirsty for lights action and festivities, (2(

    Nizlen alayna el leyl be romusha el suud we atash lil hub
    El medine atchane lil nuur, haraka, we aayadun

    Put on the red dress that becomes you
    the one that so enlightens, your face a fire it glows,
    come and don't count the time thats passing
    youth is a gift that passes, too quickly as it comes
    aaaaaaaaaaaaa too quickly as it comes

    Ilbis libsek el ahmar elli mexellilek shaxsiyye
    Elli nawwerrek, and menawwer wijjek
    Taala we la tihsib el waqt elli yemur
    El murahqa hidiye tintehi awwil ma tigi
    Awwil ma tigiiiiiiiii

    what should await us tommorow morning
    oh when the sun arises

    Eih mistanina sabahiyet bukra
    Lemma tishriq el shams

    what love will be burning out,
    and what love shall be born.

    Ey qalb ha yihreq {which heart’s will melt or burn}
    We ey hub ha yinxiliq
    ,=mhmd=.
     
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    shukran shurkran jazilan. Ah or nam ana fathem (understand). I know what you mean. I hanged out with lebanese friends in my college years and then when Egyptians came I started to learn egyptian. They laughed and told me I was trying to speak like lebanese. THey are happy I'm learning Egyptian but now Moroccans are coming into the picture lol. I love to impress people so I sing to them but shukran. : ) Is Lebanese very different from the rest of the Arab dialects/
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    Quote Originally Posted by ELADITSA@HOTMAIL.COM
    shukran shurkran jazilan. Ah or nam ana fathem (understand). I know what you mean. I hanged out with lebanese friends in my college years and then when Egyptians came I started to learn egyptian. They laughed and told me I was trying to speak like lebanese. THey are happy I'm learning Egyptian but now Moroccans are coming into the picture lol. I love to impress people so I sing to them but shukran. : ) Is Lebanese very different from the rest of the Arab dialects/
    same with me.

    no, Lebanese isnt different from rest of arabs dialects. more different is Morrocan or Algeria because of French influence

    Arabic has so many dialects, but we tend to understand eachother and our tongues automatically twist and start talking to each other normally so that u can understand. there is also a standard or "Classical" arabic that we can speak, optional, it's the one we are taught in school, and the one books are wrote on. while lets say egyptian or lebanese dialect are only used colloquially, but through out time has developed into scriptive (such as in scripts in movies, TV) but not very different from the standard dialect.

    in Egypt, the city Alexanderia if u visit and notice, has street signs in Greek too. when enter the city, it says "Welcome To Alexanderia" in arabic, english, and Boldly, in Greek. many citizens in the city speak greek, some italian too.

    the arabic dialect variances are an amazing thing. it can also be seen in the spanish language in Latin America and Spain, but it isn't as rich in the difference.

    __________________
    With love, from Arabia
    ,=mhmd=.
     
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    ELADITSA@HOTMAIL.COM said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by arabianofelix
    same with me.

    no, Lebanese isnt different from rest of arabs dialects. more different is Morrocan or Algeria because of French influence

    Arabic has so many dialects, but we tend to understand eachother and our tongues automatically twist and start talking to each other normally so that u can understand. there is also a standard or "Classical" arabic that we can speak, optional, it's the one we are taught in school, and the one books are wrote on. while lets say egyptian or lebanese dialect are only used colloquially, but through out time has developed into scriptive (such as in scripts in movies, TV) but not very different from the standard dialect.

    in Egypt, the city Alexanderia if u visit and notice, has street signs in Greek too. when enter the city, it says "Welcome To Alexanderia" in arabic, english, and Boldly, in Greek. many citizens in the city speak greek, some italian too.

    the arabic dialect variances are an amazing thing. it can also be seen in the spanish language in Latin America and Spain, but it isn't as rich in the difference.

    __________________
    With love, from Arabia
    WOW I WANT TO VISIT ALEXANDRIA SOME DAY, I WANTED TO VISIT LEBANON BUT I HAVE TO WAIT NOW TILL THEY REBUILD. GOD BE WITH THEM
    THE GREEK AMERICAN TRANSLATOR : ) AND LYRIC WRITER IN GREEK AND ENGLISH.