Way.Point

On the road rolling tires/
Old Flyers on my feet/
Holding fire from the tree/
Blowing smoke into the breeze/
Gold scriber era sown into my mind's black hole/
Create space to drift off in for a while, alone/
Solo cypher/

Rewinding time's swift slope as I climb/
Through my past's apparatuses/
Studied the written atlas/
Mapped out for our soul's path/
To one day reach the mansions that sit just outside man's grasp/
A land made from Devine hands/

Streets lined with precious stones/
Celestial architecture in rows designed to stretch out forever/
Dreams do come true/
Just don't neglect em'/
Root the goals you elected and let them grow/
Homie hope is infectious/
Go get infected/

Don't fret over oceans ahead/
Or wait for life to show you how short it is way before you respect it/
Catch me trekking through the storm ridden valleys within it/
Shadow of death left hidden behind the signs of incentive, to be alive/

Watching day hold night's image, Winter time/
The wind spinning vicious/
Still this light bulb flickers inside/
Hearts filled with emptiness/
I feel something different in mine/
Tryna become aligned with what the Holy Scripture describes/

Went and voided my ticket for a one way trip, down to the bottomless pit/
I'd rather sit on clouds and kick it around those who want the bottom to only be those clouds on the sole of their kicks/
Go to a home where I'm close to my friends, and folks I've known/

Hope you all find meaning for believing/
Indigo child smiling for no reason it seems/
Even since a seed I've been reaching for freedom/
Place my faith in Yahweh until the day that I meet Him/

Seasons of change blend evenly/
Frequently/
For those who stay the same/
Broke through the chains that composed my distain/
Arranged my patterns in a manner that was fit for the stars/
Tuned the negative out/
Extended the span of my range/

Breathe life into your days/
Oxygenate the things that you say/
Give it weight and get lifted' away/
I know trials stand in my way, but they'll never leave me sittin'/
Destined to find mine/
Until then patience is my mission/

Waitin' isn't though/
I traded shame in for repentance/
Knew I had to let it go, so I could go get it/
Rather be forgiven than spending my life dying to fix it/
I plan to rise/
Fly the skies until I find my beginnin'/

You've written some great lines here, makes me think. Lots of good line pairs with whole thoughts. I don't have a clue how it should style in song but that's ok. Ilike the simplicity of the 4th stanza as well and I assume that it's a bridge or chorus. Nice work, it's a pleasure to read.

Hey thanks for the feedback Teshka, glad you enjoyed it. It's just a verse, not quite meant to be a full song. Thanks for reading though!

This is an interesting piece you've written. I would suggest condensing it a bit so that the focus is sharpened. Some lines are a bit repetitive. The 8th section is well written. I really like the following lines: "Seasons of change blend evenly/Frequently/For those who stay the same...Extended the span of my range".