Pride Before the Fall

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  1. Johnb31's Avatar

    Johnb31 said:

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    You got it all figured out
    Every word leaves your mouth
    More perfect than the last
    You think you are fast
    In yet you're stuck standing still
    Lost in this dark mill
    Constantly chipping away
    At the arrogance that's there to stay
    "Chorus"
    Pride before the fall
    Pride before the fall
    Just like the serpent
    You fall
    Stuck to the ground
    You slither now
    Nowhere to go
    No one to know
    Pride before the fall


    You got it all in your mind
    You don't even need time
    Trapped within your life
    You crave nothing but strife
    You don't need anyone
    All you want is everyone
    To bow to you
    To see your word as true
    "Chorus"
    Pride before the fall
    Pride before the fall
    Just like the serpent
    You fall
    Stuck to the ground
    You slither now
    Nowhere to go
    No one to know
    Pride before the fall
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    My only comment is this;these two verses are outstanding.I think if you could write one more,it would be a strong rocker.If it's two verses I think you short change a possible outstanding song.Just my opinion;I could be wrong.......
    One last thing:The title is classic.It sells the song by itself!
     
  3. Johnb31's Avatar

    Johnb31 said:

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    Hey Doug! Yeah this song isn't really complete still trying to figure out where it's going.
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind