Untitled Beginning

I form evil quatrains
torture from the Renaissance age
pressin' hombres
'til thier body is concave
welcome to the mindset of hip hop's enclave
beyond brave
hand feeding tigers chopped steak
in the Sunderbans
a place where humans are entrees
" donde ? "
a thousand miles east of Bombay
I leave cities destroyed like Pompeii
mouth is Mount Vesuvius
even when I'm blasè
I do not play

Any feedback is welcome. I'll be adding more to this.

yeah..my ambition to win,got me trailing the seas
of brimstone..claiming pain is the key
to freedom..from the cyclic disease to living at ease
like peace is the weapon..for painless relief
i've lost three lives but it ain't done yet
till am dead and i can never awake
re-live with the ghosts in the afterlife..claiming crown is the aftermath
to the royal rapport in the after strife
damn...i ain't done for life
still 25 to life to reaching softened heights
flying through these cloudy nights
treading the hoary paths to reaching shinny skies...