Small Salute

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  1. Inskeepruler's Avatar

    Inskeepruler said:

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    Here is a song that I wrote in honor of my dad.


    Verse:
    The Giving Tree
    You gave to me
    Taught me what it means
    To give up everything

    I was a child
    One that was beguiled
    And so you smiled
    Until your final hour

    Chorus:
    This is my small salute to you
    This is my small salute to you

    Verse 2:
    The memories
    You shared with me
    They remedy
    And put my soul at ease

    You made me laugh
    When I was sad
    This is a dad
    A lesson that would last

    Chorus 2:
    This is my small salute to you
    This is my small salute to you
    This is the least that I could do
    This is my small salute to you

    Verse 3:
    The Giving Tree
    You gave to me
    Taught me what it means
    To love a family

    Chorus 3:
    I’ve learned to laugh because of you
    I’ve learned to love because of you
    I’ve learned to live because of you
    And I will live without you
    Smilez
     
  2. BackInBlack's Avatar

    BackInBlack said:

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    Nice writing. Great sentiment. I think it caught me most of all because it made me think of my dad. Good job. Lyrics are supposed to evoke an emotion. No matter which.
     
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    Inskeepruler said:

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    Thank you. Yeah, I wrote this in honor of my father. He died when I was young. This song means very much to me. I poured a lot of feeling into it, and the words seemed to write themselves.
    Smilez
     
  4. Kerri Faye Yates's Avatar

    Kerri Faye Yates said:

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    Wonderful words.
    ~Kerri Faye