Everday

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  1. JoshD said:

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    Verse 1:

    It's faithless, it's timeless,
    promises worth breaking are always best.
    Your phone line is so busy,
    and your thoughts are occupied by him.
    Whatever you fancy,
    to whoever you want.
    just know that.

    Chorus:

    I won't be waiting here when you come back down next time.
    Don't think you know how hard it is to watch a show for the world to see,
    can't seem to get over it now.
    Can't seem to look me in the eyes can't bare to look at these empty holes and ask me why.
    I feel so alone.

    Verse 2:

    My words seem so tragic,
    Melancholy notes and melodies.
    The only way to show you,
    how much your words can mean to me.
    and I'm just so damn tired,
    sleep forever it's the only place I'm safe.

    Chorus:

    I won't be waiting here when you come back down next time.
    Don't think you know how hard it is to watch a show for the world to see,
    can't seem to get over it now.
    Can't seem to look me in the eyes can't bare to look at these empty holes.
    You can't bare to ask me why.

    Bridge:

    Just think of me on all your lonely nights.
    Coming down to this alone.
    And I can't change,
    pushed right above my face.
    Your too busy to help me not be here.
    Said you always be here,
    where are you now?

    Where were you, where were you, where were you?

    Chorus/outro:

    I won't be waiting here when you come back down next time.
    My so called misconceptions were right on you.
    Saturday mornings aren't ours anymore.
    deep conversations are replaced by this screaming silence.

    Where were you, Where were you, Where were you, Where are you?
    Last edited by JoshD; 08-09-2014 at 04:00 PM.
     
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    Kerri Faye Yates said:

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    These are some really great lyrics. It paints a pretty vivid scene, and I like that. I'd love to here how it would sound though because I can't quite pick up on the pattern.
    ~Kerri Faye
     
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    Jim Colyer said:

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    Nice writing, but I would add some concrete images.
    Jim Colyer Girl albums
     
  4. JoshD said:

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    Alright thanks
     
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    Kerri Faye Yates said:

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    You have a really great voice! It's still a little rough on the first chorus, but I really like the guitar too. Keep it up, it'll be pretty damn good!
    ~Kerri Faye
     
  6. JoshD said:

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    Thank you so much!
     
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    Kerri Faye Yates said:

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    You've very welcome!
    ~Kerri Faye