I love you inside out

This is a song I have written (lyrics and melody) Vocal by Dattie Do, arrangement and demo record Vladimir Grebenkin. We plan to pitch this song. Your feedback will be very much appreciated.

Below is the link to my song: “I love you inside out”:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NM_n...&feature=share


I love you inside out
©2014 Irwin Abrigo

- (Verse 1)
today is your day
I wanna do things your way
Lift the spirit high
and make it a special day
Tonight will come a live
I’m gonna lay at your side
And we’ll be making love
Just like the first time

- (Chorus)
You’re a special lady
and I love you only
I’ll give my heart and soul
unto you baby
There ain’t nothing I wouldn’t do
for you
And in my heart there ain’t no doubt
I’m the one who loves you inside out

- (Verse 2)
Honey it’s okay
I wanna to know your wishes
Your wish is my command
I’ll do what you say
Tonight we’ll light a fire
I’m gonna take you higher
Hold you in my arms
Like I’ve hold no other

- (Chorus)
You’re a special lady
and I love you only
I’ll give my heart and soul
unto you baby
There ain’t nothing I wouldn’t do
for you
And in my heart there ain’t no doubt
I’m the one who loves you inside out
- -

Inside out there ain’t no doubt
There ain’t no doubt that I’m the one
I’m the one who loves you you know It’s true
You know I do and I care for you
Truly you have proven
With no doubt
I’m the one, who loves you
inside out
I love you inside out
Inside out…

You’re a special one
You’re special to me
Oh baby !
I wanna spend the rest of my life
With you….
Inside out there ain’t no doubt
There ain’t no doubt that I’m the one
I’m the one who loves you you know It’s true
Ooh I love you inside, inside, inside out.

Thanks for sharing the YT. Always a matter of taste: I'd have a bit less orchestration and less reverb.
The singers'voice is good enough to handle this song without lots of "technical help" which is often needed for thinner voices.

Now the lyrics:

I myself always try to avoid putting in to many clichés such as
"I want to spend the rest of my life with you".
It doesnot sound real anymore these days.
Love is more than often an adventure. Great to see what happens.

Otherwise: always great to see people creating songs and writing lyrics, so: all the best!

Originally Posted by amaryn

Thanks for sharing the YT. Always a matter of taste: I'd have a bit less orchestration and less reverb.
The singers'voice is good enough to handle this song without lots of "technical help" which is often needed for thinner voices.

Now the lyrics:

I myself always try to avoid putting in to many clichés such as
"I want to spend the rest of my life with you".
It doesnot sound real anymore these days.
Love is more than often an adventure. Great to see what happens.

Otherwise: always great to see people creating songs and writing lyrics, so: all the best!

Amaryn, Thank you very much for giving your thoughts on my song I appreciate it. But with the poor quality demo, Vlad is the demo-producer of this song.

Thanks for listening to my song and thanks for the reply and please feel free to comment on any other song that I may post here.

Irwin