Your little miss

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  1. Teshka's Avatar

    Teshka said:

    Default Your little miss

    first time rap, i must be crazy for even trying....

    Flag this. I don't miss
    an I've been stokin some murderist bliss
    It's time to lay some new pave all over your favorite rave
    make you cry so hard u'll be diggin your own grave
    You been talkin like i'm just some girlie pup
    struttin all stuck up
    but i'm about to tuck n rumble like a diesel truck
    so just try to keep up

    I keep hearin a loser tryna hoover a move
    like old school but you're just rustin a groove
    an its gettin ripe
    cause ya pipes are startin to back up
    Don't go stressin I'm just vettin the lesson
    cause all I been gettin is like 12 year olds pettin
    in the back of the room.
    Sh*t where's my broom

    While you screwin it up i'm doin it
    Takin up your slack with both hands tied behind my back
    You write what your brain is fed with erasable lead
    but I ink in red like i already bled you dead
    But suck up your lip and don't trip, if you slip up
    I'll be rubbin your face in the chalk line trace
    of where you were layin while the Big girl was playin
    Just sayin i'm on your case cause you misplaced the pace

    But maybe you never had it....you soundin so bad it
    falls all out like a bad case of gout
    You struttin all hoodie but you can't hide your slide
    I will confide i'ma ride you right off the cliff
    cause the difference in you n me
    is like a Tiffany v s Brittany
    I'm the diamond of the Rymon
    an you're just the dust of a crusty lump of rust

    Flag this. I'm the kiss of death
    For your hit or miss brain trippin-ness
    But wait let me guess....it's a test
    U just pretendin to be spinnin like tech n9ne
    But it ain't workin, you just lurkin n jerkin
    on my free time, droppin rhyme for a dime
    But while you dyin i'ma holla for the dolla
    an take my roll and your soul to the bank
    cause i'm the rank
    an you stank.
    cha.
    Music is what feelings sound like
    Listen to the Love
    ~♥♥~
     
  2. BackInBlack's Avatar

    BackInBlack said:

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    Not bad for your first time. There's some cool rhymes in this. Keep working at it.
     
  3. Teshka's Avatar

    Teshka said:

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    ty BInB, it may take me a month or two to try something like this again, but I had fun actually getting this one done
    Music is what feelings sound like
    Listen to the Love
    ~♥♥~
     
  4. MoonRide*r*'s Avatar

    MoonRide*r* said:

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    Whoa!
    I knew you had it inya.
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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