Whiskey And Wheels (by 2numbers and Back In Black)

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  1. 2numbers said:

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    He let her walk away
    Some time to cool off
    He let her open the door
    Because of his love
    She walked away that night
    Left him with their son
    Her last words to him
    This has just begun

    She's gonna show him
    This wont happen again
    Just blowing off some steam
    Time with good friends
    She comes around and
    She realizes how he feels
    She can never tell him
    She hit the whisky and wheels

    Whiskey and wheels
    Fast times and cheap thrills
    Whiskey and wheels
    She had to know how it feels

    She couldn't take it
    No excitement left at all
    Everything seemed vacant
    Boring and oh so dull
    She left him sitting there
    On the couch that night
    She drove off into
    The big city's bright lights

    He'd become complacent
    Same routine day in, day out
    He just couldn't face that
    There was anything to doubt
    She stormed off that night
    Left him with all of the bills
    She can never tell him
    She hit the whiskey and wheels

    Whiskey and wheels
    Fast times and cheap thrills
    Whiskey and wheels
    She had to know how it feels

    It was sunny the day
    when she finally went away
    Never saying how she felt
    Strange thing standing
    At the landing
    Of the coffin where he knelt
    He will never know how she feels
    She fell under the whiskey and the wheels

    Whiskey and wheels
    Fast times and cheap thrills
    Whiskey and wheels
    She had to know how it feels
     
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    BackInBlack said:

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    I think we did a great job on this one.
     
  3. Alex Robinson said:

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    Indeed, nicely structured.
     
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    BackInBlack said:

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    Thanks Alex.
     
  5. 2numbers said:

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    In hind sight, my first verse is kinda bad. too much too soon.
     
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    BackInBlack said:

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    It's not that bad. It could've been better but it's still good. You know you can edit it right? Work on it until you feel it's better.