Last Breath

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  1. Jim Colyer's Avatar

    Jim Colyer said:

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    I'll love you
    With my last breath
    And I'll be waiting
    If there's a heaven
    I believed in nothing
    Until I met you
    It was your faith
    That pulled me through

    I'll love you
    With my Last Breath
    My final moment
    Alive on this earth
    I wallowed in quicksand
    But you pulled me out
    There's no more pain
    There's no more doubt

    I'll speak your name
    With my Last Breath
    Renew my promise
    Right before death
    I know what it means
    To love someone
    There's no more hate
    The battle's won

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    JJCory3 said:

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    Very good! Short and simple, but it's very emotional and very easy to relate to.
     
  3. pq92k said:

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    Very good lines: "I'll speak your name/With my Last Breath/Renew my promise/Right before death". Grade: B-