Bright Inside

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  1. majesty said:

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    You See Me You See Black Look Through Me You Will See Bright Colour Can't Range My Capability Look Above You Will See My Spirit You Look Down Upon Me Couse Your See The Out Look Of Me I Am Black But Not Transparent Look My In Part And See My Worth
     
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    amaryn said:

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    It is always good to take a second look
    to understand a person
    and indeed not to judge too fast
    a message I think you put here
    in front of our eyes.
    Writing these words not like a telex message
    might do this poem a favour, majesty
    and make reading it easier.

    Thanks anyway