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    Jim Colyer said:

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    Bogged down in the past
    Landslide of memories
    Old girl friends
    Haunting me
    I just wanna go on
    Just wanna be me
    Sleep good at night
    I wanna be free

    I don't believe in Elvis
    I don't believe in Beatles
    I don't believe in ABBA
    I don't believe in Shania
    I just wanna live Now
    Now
    Now
    In this here and Now

    Live in the present
    Live for the moment
    A new world order
    Starting over
    I just wanna survive
    Just wanna show love
    Wake up refreshed
    I wanna be loved

    I don't believe in Reagan
    I don't believe in Clinton
    I don't believe in Bush
    I don't believe in Obama
    I just wanna live Now
    Now
    Now
    In this here and Now

    I've gotta go deeper
    Deeper and deeper

    I don't believe in Elvis
    I don't believe in Beatles
    I don't believe in ABBA
    I don't believe in Shania
    I just wanna live Now
    Now
    Now
    In this here and Now

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  2. pq92k said:

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    A sense of urgency is lacking in these lyrics which is oddly titled "Now". It should bold like ripping out the roots and allowing for something new to grow in its place. Incorporate different themes into the choruses. Too much repeating the same thing (musical acts; politicians). As you have written: "I've gotta go deeper/Deeper and deeper". Grade: Verse (B-); Chorus (C+)