Hello, it's me again...
I've got three new lyrics, and the song "Runaway" is recorded, you can listen to it here: http://www.cbrauer.de/downloads/runaway.mp3
But I bet there are soo many faults left in the lyrics! Could someone check them, pleaseee!
Runaway
So he says he won't live at home anymore
anyway, he says he's old enough
you may call him a stupid show-off
but thats the last he would say by himself
going without looking back
so he overlooks the hurt in their faces
so he overlooks the hurt in their faces
(Chorus)he's just a little insect
that tries to make some friends
but he doesn't see how ludicrous he is
he is much more childish than a child
but he doesn't see how ludicrous he is
There's nothing better than him
he is just too good for this world
he prattles things which sound impressive
but have no deeper sense
they all lie at his feet and lick them
they all fell into his facile trap
they all fell into his facile trap
(Chorus)
Some years ago since then he's creeping back to his home
but it's not a home anymore
it's not a home anymore
it's not a home anymore
(Chorus)
The next one is called invisible, the subject is a person who lies in coma and something else... don't know exactly what...
She doesn't want to be missed
she wishes to be invisible
she's starring through the night
but she isn't afraid
the ash is blown away by wind
time flows silently
it runs slowly through our fingers
and futur is eternal
to be awake is to be alive
she lives in a different world
unreachable, and she sleeps
what would she do if she knew she' ll die soon?
and again, helpless, it's the most important one, so please, could you read through it and reply once more??
You have to understand were they come from
to know where they will go
no one deserves being abandoned
I think you're sick
and I see you going mad again, you
fall apart near me
but you'll never try to get rid of it
what did you do that they refuse you
I'm so helpless
just static,
beetween this misery all around me
you'll keep silent
just endless
I've never seen you crying
Why do they dislike you?
They don't even know you
they speak ill about you
and imagine you don't notice it
and if you were torn inside
no one would bother
and no one would realize it
maybe not even you...
...'ll keep silent
just endless
I''ve never seen you crying
Could you please reply and tell me the mistakes? I'd be soooo grateful!