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    Default Hues of Us


    (Below is a norwegian translation, figured it did well as a translated piece too.)

    I know that the air is true...
    I know that I was born, infant
    and the care of a mother as the love from a father to which I see them both as me.
    So much is true, yet
    we're not a part of ourselves if not the thought of ourselves was..

    The prediction of a preset and this world of us, we walk on hues
    carefully painting out where to stay.... and what if man was color blind?

    Solely am I based on earth
    Based on, thus I learned to fly..
    I dreamed.
    Based off, thus I learned to write,
    but my thoughts where long gone whence..
    I forgot.

    Didst the silence a weary man and his shelter..
    from a beauty which was also weary and untouched.

    I've known these hills for so long, and my way home is yonder.
    By the mountains...had a different song, so I dreamed of me and that which is true
    and the space between us is greater than love.

    Fargetoner av Oss:
    Jeg vet at lufta er sann..
    Jeg vet at jeg ble født, spedbarn
    og omsorgen av en mor som kjærligheten fra en far til at jeg ser på dem begge som meg.
    Så mye er sant, ennå..
    vi er ikke en del av oss selv vist ikke tankene av oss selv en gang var.

    Prediksjonen av en forhåndsinnstilt og denne verdenen av oss, vi vandrer på fargetoner...
    forsiktig mens vi maler hvor en vi skal bo....og hva vist menneske var farge blinde?

    Utelukkende er jeg basert på jorda
    Basert på, dermed lærte jeg og fly..
    jeg drømte...
    Basert av, dermed lærte jeg og skrive,
    men tankene mine var langt borte hvorfra..
    jeg glemte.

    Gjorde stillheten en trett man og hans ly..
    fra en kjønnhet som var også trett og urørt.

    Jeg har kjent disse åsene for så lenge, og min vei hjem er der borte og over.
    Ved fjellene...hadde en annen sang, så jeg drømte om meg og det som er sant..
    og avstanden mellom oss er større en kjærligheten.
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    It's always a treat reading your poetry

    I just wish i could understand just a few words of that Norwegian or whatever it is
    Music is what feelings sound like
    Listen to the Love
    ~♥♥~

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    Hi Eccer.

    Thank you for your kind words about the work I submitted previously.

    As Teshka said... I would love to be able to read this as a Norwegian speaker. The translation maybe makes it a little hard to understand each sentence entirely in the way that you intended to portray it.

    That being said.. I can tell that its a nicely written piece with an interesting sentiment. There is one line that I found particularly beautiful...

    'The space between us is greater than love'.

    For me this exemplifies the idea of how the feeling that comes with not being with someone can feel stronger than love. It's like the desperation of seperation is so strong that the feeling of love itself couldn't possibly over power it.

    :-)

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