Take My Hand (12/8/14)

When dreams become nightmares
Like night becomes day
When promises fall apart
I’ll be the first to say

Take my hand, though it’s tough right now,
Through trials and tribulation,
We’ll figure it out.
We may not be okay,
At least not right now,
But just take my hand,
I’ll save you somehow.

Joy turns to sorrow, diamonds to coal
Your world is falling apart
Searching for your soul
I’ll be the first to say

Take my hand, though it’s tough right now,
Through trials and tribulation,
We’ll figure it out.
We may not be okay,
At least not right now,
But just take my hand,
I’ll save you somehow.

We’ll be okay, it’s not the end
It’s not the end

Take my hand, though it’s tough right now,
Through trials and tribulation,
We’ll figure it out
We may not be okay,
At least not right now,
But just take my hand,
I’ll save you somehow

When dreams become nightmares
Like night becomes day
When promises fall apart
I’ll be the first to say

I was thinking that second line should be "Like day becomes night." Am I right or wrong?

I think it makes more sense that way, yes, but I kinda like the rhyme too :P

May I ask a question.........the last line in the 3rd stanza.I get what you're going for,but this line screws up both the rhyme and beat.Just my opinion,I could be wrong.Otherwise ..........fantastic!

I struggled with that line a bit! I wanted to keep the same format, but it just didn't work as well as I'd hoped. Perhaps I'll try to find something more appealing!